Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Narrative Twist

“ Once Princess Next Nothing ”
By: Andrew Orozco


The king’s daughter came to the amphitheater to watch the man's fate. It turns out that the night before the big show she bribed men to put meat under every seat in the amphitheater. The day of the show, the princess motions to the door that holds the tiger. She anticipated that once the tiger was released, he would go for the closest and most convenient spot for meat considering the people who keep the tiger captive don’t ever feed it. The princess sees the tiger sniffing knowing her plan is working. The tiger leaps into the crowd instead of going for the man to eat the nearest steak.


The crowd is going crazy, the tiger is viciously eating steaks one by one. As the crowd panics, the tiger mistakes them as prey and chomps away at civilians one at a time. The princess set this diversion to make the crowd leave in panic hopefully trying to escape the amphitheater including the man. This goes as planned, as everybody runs for the exits. The king had separated from the mass panic. Eventually everybody gets out including the tiger. She is eager to find her lover and have them live happily ever after, but the only problem is that he is nowhere to be found.


The princess looks everywhere around the abandoned amphitheater, but can not find him or anybody. After a good while she quits and heads back home to her palace.
“Oh wait!“ says the princess. “ I don’t live there anymore. The man I thought who was my father is dead to me. I shall live on my own.”
The princess finds another change of clothes from one of the prisoners rooms and puts that on. She puts it on to blend in with the crowd, because she isn't the little rich girl she thought she was anymore. She has to learn how to survive on her own now.


She exits the amphitheater in anguish, knowing that her plan never worked and her lover could be anywhere, maybe even dead. She blends in with the citizens, really well actually. People thought of her as one of their own, some wanted to befriend her. There was one problem though. Her prisoner disguise raised “some” suspicion. Especially to the rich.
Everything was fine until one person yelled, “ Guards! “ and pointed right toward her.
The princess thought “what should I do?”
She ran the fastest she had ever ran, and eventually she outran them. She placed herself down against a wall exhausted, but eventually night came. She was really curious about a huddled crowd in the middle of the road. A man walked out of the huddle,
“What’s going on?” said the princess.
“There’s a dead man on the floor!“ A random citizen said. She pushed herself to the front and saw her lover on the floor, dead.


She didn’t know what to say. She felt like something died inside her.She felt like she had been pierced with an arrow, but just couldn't fall to the ground and just die. She fell to her knees, and held his dead body in her arms, stewing in his blood feeling sorrow.
She told him, “I’m sorry” and sobbed softly.  


It was morning. She had her dead lover still in her arms. With all of her anger bubbled up inside her unexpressed. Anger she needed to express, and she knew just how. She said “ Father must pay. “ She was going pay her father a little visit to kill him.


She was walking, walking with confidence and vengeance. Once again she raised suspicion.
Someone yelled “Guards, a lose prisoner, get her!“ She ran again. This time there were more guards then there usually is considering that she was going to the richer side of town. She ran to a horse that was parked on the side of the road and stole it. The guards never caught up to her. She said to herself “ Next stop, home. “


She got to the palace, with rage in her fist and rage in her face. She knew she was no longer the princess anymore, so instead she climbed up the windows.
After all her huffing and puffing she finally got to the top of her and her father’s palace and said,
“This ends tonight.” She climbs into what used to be her room. She opened the door and left her room into the hallway. She walked quietly and stealthily to her father’s room. She saw her father overlooking his whole kingdom calmly. The princess ran as fast as she could toward her father assassinating him with her father’s own knife. Her father collapsed to the floor bleeding and suffering. Her father still had a little life in him, just barely. the princess had a chance let her father hear the last words he will ever hear in his life.


“You stole my love away from me “ said the princess.“ “You think that I like to live a rich and stressful life!“ “He was the only thing I ever wanted and you just took him away from me!“  “Of all the things you ever gave me he was the one I had most wanted, but he’s gone now, because of you.“ “You don’t deserve to be king or a father, I wish you had never been apart of my life“ the princess said said quietly as she ended the kings suffering.


The guards had spotted her. She drew more attention with her father's blood on her which had her being shot at by the guards. More and guards came,
the princess thought to herself “What do I do?“ She made her decision and decided to run to the highest room in her palace which wasn't her father's room, it’s the peak of the palace. She ran the fastest she had ever run. She was scared, angry, adrenaline pumping through her veins.


She reached the top of the palace. Crossbows pointed at her head by guards. She didn’t know what to do.
“Come here miss, before you come down from there a way that you may not like.“ said one of the guards.

“You won’t be able to catch me“ said the princess. She jumped off the ledge plummeting to the ground, hoping she can make peace with god.

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Blog for Week 10/26/15

Prompt: How Elements of a Story Interact with One Other
Focusing on how the Conflict Drives Characters Development
Coraline By: Neil Gaiman

In the book Coraline the conflict is between her and the Other Mother, the villain, is taken to a really deep. By that I mean this conflict emotionally hurts Coraline in the most evil way you can think of. Having no one other than the cat to help her face the other mother, this indeed made her change. I mean having a little face on an evil which like her basically alone has to be tough and change someone's life forever. 

The conflict changes her because she like anyone battling someone mentally or physically, in this case mentally, is because she is scared. Taking someone's parents away to me is cruel. She just has to mentally face her alone with no help at all. You never really saw any character in Coraline until now when she found out that her parents were taken away from her. Having to face the other mother drives her to being scared because she is just a kid. Taking on an adult technically by herself. If that were me that would drive me to being scared.

The conflict also changes her because Coraline is determined during the conflict between her and the Other Mother. When the author introduced this character to the reader, in this case me, I though " Oh, this character will probably have no meaning in this book and won't pertain to the story at all. " To me the first few pages I read Coraline was just this boring girl who lives in a pink palace. When you see her face the other mother, solve puzzle by puzzle she is very determined to free her parents from the other mother. Like I said in the first paragraph she is scared, but she doesn't care if she she's scared or is going to lose she just knows that her mom and dad are her only motive. Tis shows how determined she is to finding her parents beating the Other Mother.

Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Blog for Week 10/14/15 - Coraline

Prompt: Describe the Main Characters
Coraline by: Neil Gaiman
Pages Read: 86
                              
      Coraline, is a book about a girl who has recently moved into a pink palace with some " unique " people living in the other apartments. She finds a shiny key and a little door that fits the lock. What is behind this door will change her life forever. 

     Coraline ( the antagonist ) is mostly so far a boring, dull, and characterless girl, but on the side has a passion for exploring and adventure when she can find a chance to explore and be adventurous. The part where I am currently reading her characterization seems to change during the conflict between her and her other mother. You see her explorer side of her coming to use and she seems to be scared. To me it looks like this fear will change her character and scar her forever. 

     Of course there has to be a villain or problem in a story. Well that villain is  " The other Mother ". She like all female villains, is an evil witch that challenges Coraline by having her use her exploration skills. She is a mean, evil, and demented woman. She really tries to hurt Coraline mentally during this conflict. This is how I think The Other Mother's actions will maybe make Coraline face tough decisions and problems that will change her attitude towards the end of the story.

     In this story Coraline has a sidekick I should say, sort of like a helpful Robin if that makes you comfortable. This sidekick is " The Cat ". I bet what you're wondering is if this cat has a name but why he doesn't have a name is because as he says " Cats don't use names ". This cat to me is very sly, clever, and wise. He seems very educated for a cat, he seems to be like one of those know at all people accept he's a cat. He talks very smart and sly. You might think a cat like this can be very witty, but the cat is surprisingly very kind to Coraline especially during this hard time she is having with  " The other Mother ".



Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Banned Books Vlog


Of Hop on Pop
By Dr. Suess 




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"Most Frequently Challenged Books Written by Authors of Color 1990-1999." American Library Association. American Library Association, 2015. Web. 8 Oct. 2015. <http://www.ala.org/bbooks/frequentlychallengedbooks/challengedauthors/authorsofcolor>.


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